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Demon Girl
Penelope Fletcher

• Nook Book: 480 pages
• Publisher: Smashwords Edition
• Language: English
• Genre: YA, Paranormal Romance
• ISBN-13: 978-1-4523-7321-8

2/5 stars
I think I need to start this review by justifying why I gave it two stars.  First of all, how cool is that cover? Kudos for that.  Secondly, it was free.  I love free reading. 
I fell right into this book as far as story plot went for the first few chapters.  I think it lost me a little bit when I realized there wasn't much effort put into editing.  Nothing bothers me more than a printed book that looks brilliant only to have errors littering the pages.
Progression of the story was also lacking in my opinion.  I could have skipped a few chapters and been okay. 
Ok, so the book has fairy, vampire, witches, demons, a post-apocalyptic world, romance, fighting.... see where I'm going yet?  It had it all. Maybe too much?  I felt like I was being shifted around too much to enjoy the story for what it was, and I'm not quite sure exactly what that was. 
I think that a much younger audience would love this book.  This seems like the right kind of story that they are currently eating up right now, I just wasn't one of them.
I'm not going to give up on this author because I think after a little bit of time, possibly maturity, and a better editor her stories could blow us all out of the water.